英国留学生媒体学专业ASSIGNMNET指导需求：What is the situation of the mobile

School of Journalism, Media and Communicatio

DISSERTATION MARK SHEET

指导ASSIGNMENT Student Name ___WEIJUN XIA (Duncan)________

Module Code JN3041______________________

Dissertation Title ___What is the situation of the mobile media and can it become the mainstream media?

FIRST MARKER COMMENTS:

Research topic, abstract and introduction

Some awareness of purpose. Confused outline of research setting. Some justification of topic.
http://www.ukassignment.org/  Attempts logical links. Mostly descriptive, limited critical discussion.

Literature review
Some links made between the research topic and selection of literature. Some sources used but limited. Some theory discussed but limited. Relies on introductory level texts. Some limited awareness of practice.

Methodology
Lacks logical connections between the research questions and the selection of methodology. Little awareness of research methods. Little discussion of research issues and implications. Little awareness of strengths and weaknesses. Poor justification of research instrument design.

Findings, analysis and conclusions
Lacks logical links from previous chapters to findings and conclusions.. No evaluation of data collection process or evidence of veracity. Inappropriate data handling. Little discussion of the data findings.

Conclusion does not link to the findings in either content or tone.

新闻学院，媒体和交际

论文成绩单

学生姓名___WEIJUN夏（邓肯)________

模块代码JN3041______________________

论文题目#p#分页标题#e#___What是移动媒体的情况，才能成为主流媒体？

第一个标记的评论：

研究主题，摘要和介绍

有的宗旨意识。困惑研究论纲设置。有些主题的理由。
尝试逻辑联系。主要是描述性的，有限的批评性讨论。

文献综述
有些环节取得的研究课题，并与文学的选择。一些消息来源使用，但有限的。但有限的一些理论探讨。依赖于入门级的文本。一些实践的认识有限。

方法论#p#分页标题#e#之间的研究问题和方法的选择缺乏逻辑联系。小意识的研究方法。很少有讨论研究问题和影响。小意识的长处和短处。可怜的理由科研仪器设计。

结果，分析和结论
缺乏逻辑联系，从以前的章节调查结果和结论..没有数据的收集证据的过程或评价的准确性。不恰当的数据处理。很少讨论的数据结果。

结论不链接到任何内容或音调的结果。
 #p#分页标题#e#